What do you think about my poem? - memory candle wording for wedding program
"Flame"
A huge space
Naked and cold
Somber
Many shadows envelop
The light fades
Darkness envelopes
A small spark
Fire Training
Takes shape
Growth
Rising
Far from the shadows
A statement from the heat
Area Lighting
Revealing an object
A white band
Tall and thin
A candle
Elegant and smooth
The light source
Heating
Fusion
Drops of wax
Leachate on the site
Pick-up on the table
White spots
Burning
Steaming
The small black spots
A hand appears
One item seized
A sheet of paper
End
Eroded by time
Written on the front
Hastily scribbled
The ink lines
Words
Painful Words
A description of the memories
Terrible memories
Eager password
The candle is placed
Growing demand
Flickering in the newspaper
Scorched
Blackness
Curling
Wilting
Memory Leak
Letter by letter
Literally
Fire devours ºE-Paper
Blazing
Unstoppable
Black left behind
Disintegration
Some parts of the ash
Drifting
Fall on the floor
The dust mixture
Swept Away
A gust of wind
Cool and fast
He falls
Flicker
Collapse
Shadow crept
Area
Engulfing
Darkness again
Wednesday, February 3, 2010
Memory Candle Wording For Wedding Program What Do You Think About My Poem?
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7 comments:
Come on! I mean, really! Use the thesaurus and write something good. Who talks like that? Engulfing scribbled in haste ... etc. ... If I guess your age or level of education could say they are over 10 years - I am right? I thought so. This is not poetry is confessional DREK poor. NEVER write again .... please?
The poems are works of art from the soul and are, therefore, if they do with what you feel, what it is deep enough to.
"Memories of Flight
Letter by letter
Literally
it was good. I like it. particularly liked this part. : D poet1 not let you get. They have done a good job.
I loved, I think it's a little more deeply understand easy for some people to continue, I hope there's more reading for me
I totally agree with the Dark Prince, joined poet1 and now has spent his time implementation doen others. the poem is wrong, try to write more.
Poet Igonre 1, which never published on its side and may others. *** It is bitter and ignorant. I HINK poem is good and I enjoyed it. Why people can not even have the balls to post their own poems, left others. It is worthless to us.
I think if you try to do "deep ".... to relax a little and let it sink to ...
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